I see a few problems here.
1. Your client is not requesting a passive connection. It's trying to open a default active connection, which means your server is trying to connect back to the client on port 20. You don't have a security policy nor NAT rule to allow the outgoing connection from your server.
2. If you do want to use passive FTP, you need to make sure the FTP ALG is enabled. You also need to adjust your destination NAT rule to allow ports other than 21 to get the destination NAT, because you're locking it down to port 21 and then the security policy says "drop-untranslated."
3. Your config excerpts have a lot of stuff that is... well... backwards? Did you copy/paste this, or type it all in from somewhere? For example:
"FTP rule" should be "rule FTP"
"200.72.134.16/32 destination-address;" should be "destination-address 200.72.134.16/32;"
"destination-pool nat FTP" should be "destination-nat pool FTP"
..., etc. This is pretty confusing to look at.
What model SRX and what version of Junos are you running?